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Smile's Lack Of Sleep or Too Much Caffine Poetry, Part One

March 15th, 2004

Well I think I promised you guys this last night, so I will actually follow through. Here is the first Poem. Keep in mind that I wrote this about four years ago, and I am not saying that this is good, but it is what I was writing four years ago.


451


The people in the room
Sure they talk

But they don't say anything


Sound penetrates the air
I can hear it

But it has no meaning


Did you know?
Have you heard?

It's all just a front


In this realm
They're who they want to be

Not who they are


Being segregated
I don't say anything at all

But when I speak, people listen


I don't speak much
so people think what I say is special

But I'm no different


Ok. That was titled 451, if you couldn't tell. It is a reference to Ray Bradbury's book Farenheit 451. And in this one I am alluding to a convesation that Guy Montag, the protagonist, had with his neighbor girl, Clarisse, about people. In it you get her view of the way people talk and the way society is. I think this also kind of reflected the way I was think about people at the time. I remember reading that book and it making a lot of sense to me, especially that dialogue. Of course I think I pointed out that I was no better than anyone else.

posted by: smiles3 comments »

3 comments

Comment from: a partially blind [Visitor] · http://www.partiallyblind.net
that's way cool. it makes you sound like a very important person, four years ago.
03/15/04 @ 22:21
Comment from: Smiles [Visitor] · http://smiles.brendoman.com
Yeah, the older stuff is, the more important it makes you.
03/15/04 @ 23:18
Comment from: DanskPia [Visitor]
I like your style
07/08/04 @ 08:40

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