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Embracing the Chaos

09/29/08

Permalink 02:37:39 pm by matt, Categories: me, education

I'm teaching a creative writing class this year. I haven't taught this before, and I'm really enjoying it. So far they've produced some good stuff. I'm making an effort to keep up with the students, writing the same things that I'm assigning. I figure this way I'll better understand some of the problems they are facing as they write. The other result is that I've written some poems that I'm pretty happy with. I'm know I'm no poet, but I think I can carry a tune, so to speak. So I figured I'd share some of these with the world. Here's the first.
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embracing the chaos

I stick my head inside Will's room.
Has a bomb has gone off?
Hot Wheels,
scraps of paper,
shoes, trading cards.
Action figures stare up at me.
Has he even been working on this?

Above the clutter,
He's on the bed,
reading comics.

"Dude, get to work! Done in twenty minutes or no swimming!"

Eight years earlier this boy on the bed is
strapped to my stomach, wide eyed, taking in the chaos,
wonder of a third-world airport.
Ukrainian guards in high hats - "He needs his visa."
Questions at the gate - "I thought we had everything."
Confusion - "He says we don't."
Nervous glances between his mother and I.

From the hallway I step into his mess.
"Come on. I'll give you a hand."
He smiles,
hops off the bed,
gathers up an armful of super heroes
and drops them into the toy box.

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3 comments

Comment from: Bill [Visitor]
BillI guess you like to make me cry. Two weeks ago at the Walnut Valley Festival John McCuchin sang "Happy Adoption Day" Wow.
God is good. All the time!!!!!!!!!
10/02/08 @ 06:46
Comment from: matt [Member] Email
mattThanks.
10/04/08 @ 06:01
Comment from: Stacey [Visitor]
Staceywow. definitely got me too. Agreed with Bill. Good Work! ;-)
11/01/08 @ 20:45

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